Serious about starting your novel? Here are three things that will immediately make your writing better.
If you're serious about this writing thingy, you'll want to save yourself time and be aware of any writing issues before they even arise. Here are three things that you'll need to know about before you get too many pages into your book.
Joining two actions using 'as' and 'while'. (We hate this.)
A common bugbear of mine involves joining two actions together using the words 'as' and 'while'. People who do it, do it a lot, and after a while, it gets boring.
Writing tip: Word repetition makes you look amateur. Here’s what to do about it.
There are lots of ordinary words that we have to repeat as we write. They're building blocks, if you like, creating vehicles that carry along the more interesting words and phrases.
But repeating unique words, phrases or descriptions several times in a paragraph, or a page, or even a chapter, makes your writing seem stale.
Point of View in your writing. Why it’s important, and why you must stay consistent.
POV is the way editors and experienced writers refer to 'Point of View', which is simply this: the viewpoint through which your story is told.
The most important thing I can say at this point, is that whatever Point of View you choose, you need to be consistent.
5 ways to reveal crucial plot information without being boring
At a few different points in your novel, you'll need to reveal information that is important for the plot to work. It might be back story about a character. It might be technical information about a piece of machinery which is important to know. It might be a detail about the way your fantasy world works.
Whatever it is, you're gonna have to dump some info on your reader. And just like in the real world, dumping needs to be done right.
How to fill your chapters with tension so your reader will turn the page
At the end of a chapter, readers should want to turn the page. They should need to read the next chapter. What's going to happen next? they should ask. I can't live without knowing.
Writing tips: Variety makes your sentences more interesting.
I like reading a lot. I do it quite often. Reading is interesting to do.
You're bored already, aren't you.
I am, and I wrote those sentences. But they're so samey: five words long, similar types of words, similar construction. Dull, dull, dull.
Three ways to write better dialogue
Dialogue can be amazing in a novel. It can make the characters feel closer, it makes the pacing more immediate, and it can reveal all sorts of things about characters without you having to work too hard.
But dialogue can also be terrible. Boringly, yawningly, cringingly terrible. So how do you make your dialogue work for you rather than against you?