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May 30, 2017
Firewheel Press
memoirs, novels, writing tips, bugbears

Joining two actions using 'as' and 'while'. (We hate this.)

May 30, 2017
Firewheel Press
memoirs, novels, writing tips, bugbears
Joining two actions using 'as' and 'while'. (We hate this.)

A common bugbear of mine involves joining two actions together using the words 'as' and 'while'. People who do it, do it a lot, and after a while, it gets boring. 

May 30, 2017
Firewheel Press
memoirs, novels, writing tips, bugbears

Tagged: conjunctions, as and while

 

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